DnX-Danefex's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Draze - Let The Party Burn]

pretty awesome.

yeah i guess i have a pretty high standard for a 12 year old and my older bro whos 27. he teaches me alot of stuff about techno music/trance/elictronic music.

8 originality- well not realy a great original concept. basicaly just a basic comercial techno song with some vocals.but atleast your loop doesnt stay in 1 key tone and actualy has a chord proggresion through the song.

7 clarity- well the clarity was pretty good but the compression issues . it seams to me that the loop peaks out at some points. but pretty clear, lead synth doesnt drown out the backround abit.
so yeah this song could use better compression.

compression tip- this tip i use when produceing music, its called a double commpressor. basical what you do * this can be done on any program or on hands on compressors*real life** is turn your volumes down real low as in 1/4 to 1/8 low and pick out 2 compressors * 3 if needed* and expiriment .the first compressor should have a low decibal rateing as in like 10 db. then the second can have a high db rateing like 25.7. this allows you to get hi volume with out maxing out .dont worry it will take some expirementing but once you get it it realy helps

8 effort- tsk tsk tsk i know that you were fooling around but spend more time foolig around with your loops this will help inprove your skills in the music produceing career/hobby.

8 overall- other than some originality issues and compression fix those up and just hit to the streets with it * i mean as in like clubs* any ways review my review i gave you. and to answer the question of why i dont submit stuff here is becuase i dont want to be harrased by zero voters and im just kinda lazy cuase this is my bros and mine account so you know if anything goes wrong then its kinda my fault. but what ever. good jorb on the song.

[Draze & 666 - Super Fly [CRMX]]

hey dj gridlock.

you are my friend a little imature dumbass.yeah mr 13 year old lets see you do something better than DRAZE. he composed/produced a wonderfull piece of techno music. and i no this will sound childish but if he went to an all girl school then he would get action every other day. no draze my reviews to your song.

8 originality- well the vocals are from Alligator vs. darude vs.Fragma - Tocastorm. but i like what you did with the slide tool with your lead synth and you just adjusted the pitch the went back to normal. the beginning build up was just right not to short and not to long.

7 diversity- not that diverse other than a couple breaks ad pitch adjustment. and at the end the lead synth. still better than mr. 13 year old flamming you. the only complaint i have is that the kick is just kicking its self through the song.

9 clarity- the song if very clear and pretty crisp and nothing is crowding the other synths/kicks/vocals.

9 effort- it shows that u put in an arse load of time in this song and look at the outcome its stupendous.lol.

other stuff- plz review my review,and dont get discouraged if anyone trys to beat you up just call me and ill fly over to the uk and help beat the shit out of them. plz review my review. and hit to the clubs with this.

Draze responds:

Hey thanks for ya awesome reviews dude.

I really agree with everything you said there. I don't really spend much time on kick breaks ect. My kicks tend to just limp through the song :P unless theres a complex pattern.

"if he went to an all girl school then he would get action every other day" haha yeah X_x its just so true.

I'd like to hear ya own stuff man, you clearly have a high standard :)

[Draze - Phantoms Virus]

this song is very unique and i realy enjoyed it.

now lets get down to the scores.

9 originality- the song is truely amazeing.i loved how you mix up the word very cool man.the the organs come in this reminds me of a classical music piece i just cant remind my self what it is.

9 diversity- yes diversity in this song is very exelent always changeing . but the kick beat its just kick kick kicking its self through the song.

9 clarity- well it was pretty good but in the second have after the organ tawrds the end when the lead synth comes in again it kins of drowns out the bass a BIT.

10 effort- well its aoviusly that you worked you ass off so i give you 2 thumbs up..

10 overall- a buetifally balanced song of expertise from a true dj at hart. im proud that you pushed the limits even farther and let this song be an insparation to all of you that even though there are limits *not the redline bar in the mixing board of fl studio 6*lol.you can push those limits even further. so start expirementing thats how draze got so good so i hope he is an insparation

now to fiffen this and a Mcperfect burger. and to my ipod it goes.

no im not zenon.i just like to break down peoples song and show them were they did something good and bad. get ready for more rviews from me.

D.n.X._danefex

p.s. im also a dj just wont be submitting stuff here

[Bounce it!--_--(1:37)]

do i hear a benni bennassi remix...

you did a realy good job remixing his song. i like your bass.i am a dj and ive been 1 for over 15 years. i do real time music produceing and im starting to get into fl studio/reason/dance ejay cuz its ALOT cheaper could you give me some suggestions on what programs to buy.

ah yes back to your song... in the riff after the vocals do i hear a detuned saw. and im glad you didnt use a snare/clap in your drum beat becuz the claps are a little overrated. i like at the end your controlled kick roll. your comprssion was good .

clarity- the bass yes we all love the bass but it drowned the voice out a little bit same with the ride.

compression tip- this is just a tip of mine with compressors that i do alot.when produceing music turn your volume of your instruments realy low about 1/4 of the way down to 1/8 of the way down. then your beats dont even go close to the red line. you then do a double compressor move. you can use a blower style,optov style what ever you perfer. thus giveing you your volume with out maxing out.then just start expirimenting.

effort-i gave you effort a 10 becuz you did a good jorb remixing this song.

originality- a 6 becuz everybody (oowe owe this is the hyperbole police were going to lock you up for saying that EVERYbody remixes this song) fine ALOT of poeple remix/remake/cover this song so you know your not the only 1 so thats y u got a 6.

diversity-not much other than a detuned saw and a break with your generic trance beat and a ride in there. any ways

overall-9 becuz no one is perfect but you did a superb jorb with this. im ..im proud of you son..lol.

anyways plz respond with another long ass review like you do with alot of ppl.

PERVOK responds:

Haha, alright. I'll do some explaining, siknce you gave me tips on stuff I can already do...

The HORRID compression job was on purpose. I tried to make it sound like crap, since thats what Benny does.

Yeah, it crowded out the voice, but it got the effect, no?

And this was not a remix of a Benny Benassi song, it was a song that I did that was inspired by Benny. So, my song, but in his style.

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

[-Ascension- Nova {DEMO}]

awsme job pat/tf

good job this is aftersundown and his bro. just droping by to drop you guys a line. oh and pat yes this is my bro who had the tb303 synth with bassline synthasizer. haha how do you feel now you jelos mokee.jk.lol. any ways my bro says hi.

[tF-[Force of bass]FULL*REMADE*]

good jorb.

this is very good. the base line was nice. and nice effects you put in there.and keep ascesiontrance going, o and tell pat(M.) i said hi.

[Revolutions]

awsme

kinda reminded me of a megamanx lvl/theme. good job dr47. i love your use with the synths and at the end that hit was amazingly well put. good job